This time round, we have the third and final user review of one of my favorite films of all human history. This particular reviewer takes on the (awesome) Criterion release of Akira Kurosawa's Ran:
Kurosawa's last undisputed masterpiece, "Ran" adapts "King Lear" (Shakespeare was Kurosawa's favorite writer) placing it during the 16th century in Japan. Like "Throne of Blood" (another Kurosawa classic that also adapts "Macbeth") "Ran" melds action with drama in a unique way that only Kurosawa was able to do. Sure there have been other directors that have made films about Japanese culture, Feudalism and the Samurai but none with the keen insight and profound glimpse into what makes a culture tick as well as Kurosawa.
Kurosawa had lost most of his collaborators prior to the shooting of "Ran". All of that informs the darkness and his identification for the main character. While Kurosawa freely borrowed from "King Lear", he also informed the film with many issues facing himself; he felt isolated from the Japanese filmmaking community and he was unappreciated in this late phase of his career having to scramble to get financing (frequently going overseas to get it). Kurosawa felt isolated and alone without his collaborators. The loss of his wife just prior to shooting meant that Kurosawa threw his raging emotions into "Ran" using the story of "Lear" as a means to examine his own personal situation.
Chris Marker's marvelous documentary "AK" is included as part of the package on the second disc. That by itself would also make this worth repurchasing if you're in doubt about it. However, coupled with the terrific restoration and transfer done by Criterion here it makes this an essential purchase for fans of Kurosawa's films. We also get an appreciation by director Sidney Lumet, an episode of Toho Masterworks on Kurosawa that's also quite good (although I prefer Marker's 74 minute documentary). "It is Wonderful to Create" focuses exclusively on "Ran" while Marker's documentary is a better overview of the director. Criterion has also used Kurosawa's original sketches and paintings to create sections of "Ran" as Kurosawa original saw it prior to actual production. Finally there's a new interview with lead actor Tasuya Kakadai. As usual Criterion has included an excellent booklet that includes a very good essay by film critic Michael Wilmington, a 1985 interview with Kurosawa about the making of the movie and a new interview with "Ran" composer Toru Takemitsu. This deluxe 2 disc edition makes the nonanamorphic previous edition look almost like a videotape by comparison in terms of the overall quality.
This is an essential purchase for fans of Kurosawa. Kurosawa's last epic is, perhaps, his darkest and one of his most accomplished. The extras would make this worth purchasing by themselves but the beautiful, rich high definition transfer makes this the best version of "Ran" that has ever appeared on home video. I highly recommend this film.
The writer first launches straight into the acclaim, dropping in the Shakespeare angle along the way:
Kurosawa's last undisputed masterpiece, "Ran" adapts "King Lear" (Shakespeare was Kurosawa's favorite writer) placing it during the 16th century in Japan. Like "Throne of Blood" (another Kurosawa classic that also adapts "Macbeth") "Ran" melds action with drama in a unique way that only Kurosawa was able to do.
Though a bit vaguer and less informational than I'd like — it boils down to "Ran, which puts Shakespeare through the Kurosawa lens, is great" — these sentences can be tightened into respectability. We'll first 86 the parentheses and integrate what they contain more closely into the surrounding text. Then, in the interest of avoiding deadening repetitiveness, we'll dial down the appearances of the word "Kurosawa". A quick run through the de-passive-voicifier after that, and we get:
In his last undisputed masterpiece, Kurosawa transplants "King Lear" into 16th century Japan. Like "Throne of Blood", his classic "Macbeth" adaptation — Shakespeare was the filmmaker's favorite writer — "Ran" melds action and drama as only Kurosawa could.
A somewhat separate point about the nature of Kurosawa's skill follows. It's kind of a non sequitir — we'd expect a further point about that action-drama fusion — but hey, whatever:
Sure there have been other directors that have made films about Japanese culture, Feudalism and the Samurai but none with the keen insight and profound glimpse into what makes a culture tick as well as Kurosawa.
Plenty of editors advice heartily against leading with "sure," but this review establishes a conversational enough tone that we'll run with it, albeit with an added comma for pacing purposes; if you're going for conversational vocabulary, never forget conversational rhythm. But let's go ahead and cut, with great relish, "there have been other directors that" in favor of "other directors" and "profound glimpse" in favor of nothing. (I mean, "profound glimpse"? Seriously?) I love how much it slims down:
Sure, other directors have made films about Japanese culture, feudalism and the samurai, but none have Kurosawa's keen insight into what makes a culture tick.
Now for some production background:
Kurosawa had lost most of his collaborators prior to the shooting of "Ran". All of that informs the darkness and his identification for the main character.
This point comes off a bit psychologize-y for me, but we're here to polish writing, not, alas, thinking. Purging what excess verbiage we can and trusting readers to remember that Ran's the subject of the article, we're left with a sentence that nevertheless includes the uncomfortable term "informs." But I'm sure we'll live:
Kurosawa lost most of his usual collaborators prior to shooting, which informs the film's darkness and his identification with its protagonist.
An important point comes next, though you wouldn't know by how messily it's expressed:
While Kurosawa freely borrowed from "King Lear", he also informed the film with many issues facing himself; he felt isolated from the Japanese filmmaking community and he was unappreciated in this late phase of his career having to scramble to get financing (frequently going overseas to get it).
One "inform"? Tolerable. But two? Toss it. And if we're talking about a work and how the creator, uh, worked it, using the present tense comes off a lot smoother than trying to place the historical events of the filmmaking process and the film as "executed" in the viewer's experience on two different chronological planes. That's tricky in this sentence, though, because the writer discusses both Kurosawa's actions on Ran and how they draw on his experiences outside it. On close scrutiny, the end result kinda-sorta appears to suffer from mismatched tenses, but since the movie exists in the present, it reads fine:
While freely borrowing from "King Lear", he also imbues the film with challenges he faced himself: isolation from the Japanese filmmaking community, a lack of appreciation in the late phase of his career and having to scramble, frequently overseas, for financing.
The Passion of Akira, continued:
Kurosawa felt isolated and alone without his collaborators. The loss of his wife just prior to shooting meant that Kurosawa threw his raging emotions into "Ran" using the story of "Lear" as a means to examine his own personal situation.
Basically fine, if a tad herky-jerky. Let's perform a basic de-herking/de-jerking by combining these two sentences into one and excising all words not pulling their weight. We've already established the absence of Kurosawa's collaborators, so no need to do it again. We've already established that the piece is about Ran, so no need to deliberately re-indicate it. "Isolated" isn't really necessary if we already have "alone", it's obvious that "his" situation would be "personal", we know King Lear is a story, etc. The revision, even if it still includes the clunky emotion-throwing image, has at least substantially shrunk:
Compounding Kurosawa's aloneness, the loss of his wife just prior to shooting made him throw raging emotions into the film, using "Lear" to examine his own situation.
Seeing as I'm on record as an A.K. fan — and one of Marker in general — I could hardly disagree with the following:
Chris Marker's marvelous documentary "AK" is included as part of the package on the second disc. That by itself would also make this worth repurchasing if you're in doubt about it. However, coupled with the terrific restoration and transfer done by Criterion here it makes this an essential purchase for fans of Kurosawa's films.
Good baby Jesus that's bloated. We should write this as no more than a single sentence, one about A.K. and how it adds sufficient value by itself to make Ran worth buying twice. (Note: the non-Criterion release truly sucks, so it'd be worth it anyway.) Perhaps we don't even need to state directly that the DVD includes Marker's documentary — why else would we bring it up? — but we'll play it safe today:
Chris Marker's marvelous documentary "A.K.", included as part of the package on the second disc, itself merits a repurchase of the movie.
The writer continues on the subject of extras, of which there, indeed, are some:
We also get an appreciation by director Sidney Lumet, an episode of Toho Masterworks on Kurosawa that's also quite good (although I prefer Marker's 74 minute documentary). "It is Wonderful to Create" focuses exclusively on "Ran" while Marker's documentary is a better overview of the director.
These sentences comprise mostly a list of facts; it's not far from the "extra features" bullet-pointery on the back of DVD boxes. Let's keep this a statement about what we get with the Criterion edition — mostly because I can't think of a better angle off the top of my head — but perform some flow-facilitating rearrangement. We'll cut the parentheses, predictably, but note that we'll also — and this is a rare move — insert another parenthetical statement, since the writer's remark about A.K. doesn't quite fit anywhere into the existing text:
We also get an appreciation by Sidney Lumet, an episode of "Toho Masterworks" on Kurosawa — good, though I prefer Marker's documentary — and "It is Wonderful to Create", which focuses exclusively on "Ran". ("A.K." provides a better overview of the director.)
Here come the last feature details. Though always conscientious about what to filter out, Criterion neverthess packs 'em in:
Criterion has also used Kurosawa's original sketches and paintings to create sections of "Ran" as Kurosawa original saw it prior to actual production. Finally there's a new interview with lead actor Tasuya Kakadai.
First and foremost, though this has nothing to do with prose style: the guy's named Tatsuya Nakadai. He's also not, like, some obscure historical footnote on whom nobody would think to check. C'mon now. Other than that, I can't complain about too much here other than inelegance. A little rearrangement, a comma here and there, and we're solid:
Using Kurosawa's original sketches and paintings, Criterion also creates sequences as Kurosawa envisioned them prior to production. Finally, there's a new interview with lead actor Tasuya Nakadai.
On-disc features aside, we mustn't forget the physical niceties — the writer doesn't, in any case:
As usual Criterion has included an excellent booklet that includes a very good essay by film critic Michael Wilmington, a 1985 interview with Kurosawa about the making of the movie and a new interview with "Ran" composer Toru Takemitsu. This deluxe 2 disc edition makes the nonanamorphic previous edition look almost like a videotape by comparison in terms of the overall quality.
Ooh, the VHS comparison — burn.
"Very good" carries so little meaning that it's best used (a) ironically or (b) not at all. The writer says much in these sentences that doesn't quite merit saying: Kurosawa's interview being "about the making of the movie" (doi), Toru Takemitsu being the "'Ran' composer", that sort of thing. And we'll cut the year of the Kurosawa interview, since the writer hasn't produced it for the Takemitsu one, and simply consider the both of them as a pair of interviews. I'd recommend strongly against ever remarking on something's "overall quality," but especially when you can instead compose a sentence about the better item winning the comparison. (And no, you don't need to indicate that the comparison is a comparison.) The lines we wind up with retain a whiff of clunk, but compared to how they used to read, I can deal:
As usual, Criterion includes an excellent booklet with an essay by critic Michael Wilmington and interviews with Kurosawa and composer Toru Takemitsu. This deluxe two-disc edition makes the previous, non-anamorphic release look like a VHS tape.
Here's the big thumb-up finish:
This is an essential purchase for fans of Kurosawa. Kurosawa's last epic is, perhaps, his darkest and one of his most accomplished. The extras would make this worth purchasing by themselves but the beautiful, rich high definition transfer makes this the best version of "Ran" that has ever appeared on home video. I highly recommend this film.
PROTIP: to end a piece strong, don't go on about what stuff is, and position your qualifiers so that they muddy as small a section of the water as possible. Though I first assumed fixing those problems would amount to little more than a quick re-jig, it turns out we'll have to perform some real word surgery; seeing off those "is" statements necessitates a near-complete restructure. We'll turn these four sentences about the purchase, the film, the extras, the transfer and the recommentation into one about the disc's most notable qualities. We can guiltlessly bin "I highly recommend this film," which by this point goes without stating. The writer also seems to have forgotten the "last undisputed masterpiece" designation from the beginning, so we'll cut the redundant "last" here too. Arriving at the end rebuild takes some trickery, but I think it comes out both more striking and much clearer:
An essential for the director's fans, the extras alone on Kurosawa's most accomplished and perhaps darkest epic repay purchase, but its rich, high-definition transfer makes this the best version of "Ran" ever to appear on home video.
Here's the entire review, reassembled:
In his last undisputed masterpiece, Kurosawa transplants "King Lear" into 16th century Japan. Like "Throne of Blood", his classic "Macbeth" adaptation — Shakespeare was the filmmaker's favorite writer — "Ran" melds action and drama as only Kurosawa could. Sure, other directors have made films about Japanese culture, feudalism and the samurai, but none have Kurosawa's keen insight into what makes a culture tick.
Kurosawa lost most of his usual collaborators prior to shooting, which informs the film's darkness and his identification with its protagonist. While freely borrowing from "King Lear", he also imbues the film with challenges he faced himself: isolation from the Japanese filmmaking community, a lack of appreciation in the late phase of his career and having to scramble, frequently overseas, for financing. Compounding Kurosawa's aloneness, the loss of his wife just prior to shooting made him throw raging emotions into the film, using "Lear" to examine his own situation.
Chris Marker's marvelous documentary "AK", included as part of the package on the second disc, itself merits a repurchase of the movie. We also get an appreciation by Sidney Lumet, an episode of "Toho Masterworks" on Kurosawa — good, though I prefer Marker's documentary — and "It is Wonderful to Create", which focuses exclusively on "Ran". ("AK" provides a better overview of the director.) Using Kurosawa's original sketches and paintings, Criterion also creates sequences as Kurosawa envisioned them prior to production. Finally, there's a new interview with lead actor Tatsuya Nakadai. As usual, Criterion includes an excellent booklet with an essay by critic Michael Wilmington and interviews with Kurosawa and composer Toru Takemitsu. This deluxe two-disc edition makes the previous, non-anamorphic release look like a VHS tape.
An essential for the director's fans, the extras alone on Kurosawa's last, most accomplished and perhaps darkest epic repay purchase, but its rich, high-definition transfer makes this the best version of "Ran" ever to appear on home video.
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